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adtheshiby
Joined: 25 Apr 2004
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Posted: 4/25/2004, 7:51 am Post subject: rate my webmasterss site |
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www.webmasterss.bravehost.com its going .co.uk its a bit newbish but im only 14 so dont be horrible please rate it thanx _________________ wika wika |
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Triumvirate
Joined: 24 Feb 2004
Posts: 169
Location: NY, USA
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Posted: 4/26/2004, 5:39 pm Post subject: |
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The links to different areas are near impossible to read (IE 1024*768) and the one block the one where it says join the mailing list seems to be cut off. Also, I'm not a big fan of the font style used. Your copyright at the bottom is also near impossible to read, it should be small, but not that small. I think perhaps the font style used is contributing to how hard it is to read. _________________ GamingMMO.com |
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Triumvirate
Joined: 24 Feb 2004
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Location: NY, USA
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Posted: 4/26/2004, 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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Also, just thought I'd mention that the lack of capitalization on the site makes it look very poor. And another thing I just noticed as I was checking out some other pages is that the font size is really large (as opposed to being really small like at other parts.) I also noticed another spelling/grammatical mistake several times, when you wish to say et cetera, you put ect, it is actually etc. You should probably go through and spell/grammar check all the text on the site as there are a lot of silly little mistakes that are just typos, (for instance you put liek for like, and theese, for these, trail for trial, you get the idea). I noticed on your HTML tutorials page you show text size 1 through 7, the only problem is there is no change in the text size (at least on my browser). I also see that several times you use a large textarea to put typing in, there is no real problem with this however it doesn't really make any sense at all, it is better to just put it in plain text, not in a large textbox. On your services page, right below your forum making text you have this:
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for no apparent reason at all. If your spelling/grammar is very poor I recommend getting a friend with good spelling and grammar to proofread over your entire site to get all the errors out. _________________ GamingMMO.com |
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bearqst
Joined: 06 Mar 2004
Posts: 42
Location: Sewards Ice Box
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Posted: 4/26/2004, 11:01 pm Post subject: |
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I have to agree with livewirerpg. I like the site color coordination, but the spelling needs major improvement. Get someone to proof read it. My spelling is terrible, as normally seen in my posts, so I always have a someone else proof read my site text for me. Bad spelling is a big turn off for lots of visitors.
The fonts need to be standardize, looks like you tried to do some on the copywrite, but unless you are trying to provide assistance for those vision impaired, standardize your font size, it'll add a more professionsal touch.
Otherwise, I like the layout and color. |
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adtheshiby
Joined: 25 Apr 2004
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Posted: 5/5/2004, 4:43 pm Post subject: |
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ok i know people have said loadsa times id love one of you two mayeb to work part time in my site not just proof reading as that would be boring i have a spell check feature that ill install soon. maybe one of you two could be a.. webmaster or soemthing please? just pm or email em add me 2 msn aswell adthecooldude_altounyan@msn.com
thanks
shibby
shibby lmt
webmaster _________________ wika wika |
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